3.5 stars The good: I liked this story. I liked these characters. I liked the dangling of potential future characters. I’d love to read books on Sebastian, Alexander, Vance, and Clark. Perhaps even books for Jules’ roommates? So many possibilities! Also, this cover is right up my alley. Love it. The bad: I hate to say it- it could benefit from some more editing. There were multiple instances of sentences that made no sense (including one where the second half of the sentence DIRECTLY contradicted the first half), and it ended up taking me out of the story as I tried to figure out what was actually intended by those sentences. Additionally there were quite a few instances of grammatical errors. I don’t even mention issues such as these if it is only a few, but… once you have racked up a certain number it can’t go unacknowledged in my review, unfortunately. I also found a pretty major inconsistency in the story surrounding a particular event which I won’t discuss any further in the interest of avoiding spoilers. Again, good story. Good back stories. But I think with some additional editing this could have gone from “good” to “great.” Recommended for a decent dark-ish NA read if you can look past the technical errors/need for editing.
Compulsive reader. Romantic suspense/contemporary romance/dark romance/NA romance addict. Particularly fond of mafia, forced/arranged marriage, secret baby, kidnapping, and dark alpha heroes.
Just out here doing my part for humanity- these books won't read themselves.
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